Quickly’s Rewrite

day-28
QKJ #28

 

I had thought I’d try to rewrite “This Is Just To Say” into something like my own style/voice. But I’m Trumped if I can.

 

You Might Want To Know

I’ve re-written
the laws
that were in
your favor

and which
you were probably
assuming
were unassailable

Forgive me
they were tremendous
so squishy
and so old

 

 

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